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Good qualities to explain my character in an essay?
I’m typing an essay to send to a school I really want to go to. What other qualities can I put down? Here’s my essay so far, it needs to be 300-400 words:
The [insert school name] has been a dream school for me since my brother was accepted. I believe there is great opportunity for me at this school. In response to one of your essay questions, I would have preferred if you had asked me about my character.
People have always used the words creative and well-rounded to describe me. I am a hard-working person who makes an effort to achieve my goals. Peers often come to me for advice because of my ability to handle difficult situations. Recently, my parents have decided to separate and I managed to overcome this emotional challenge. I strive to see both sides of an issue, weigh the possible outcomes of any decision I might make, and form a plan.
hi there. your essay sounds good so far. what if you took a couple of those characteristics and gave a real life example of how you showed this character trait? people love examples and that gives a bit of a personal look at you as well. it might help your readers to feel more connected to you and be more likely to choose you. hope it works out for you.
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